Saturday, November 29, 2025

field notes

I wear echoes
ragged through the city
when we talk
I talk only of childhood

I dream we dig
as if we know this earth 
and can't say why 
I wait to be turned back

they're all saying 
that leaving is necessary
they don't know 
I will never say goodbye 
_________
Pic: Red Cedar yesterday with Big A. At the start of our walk, it was tough getting my taped-up right foot into my sneaker. That made A say we should go to Urgent Care instead of on a walk, but I really needed a walk for my wellbeing. If my foot's broken, it has already been broken for over ten days, so what would another day matter anyway?

5 comments:

Nance said...

This poem has made me cry. From the moment I read the first stanza, the tears began. The second stanza is absolutely beautiful. I want this read at my eventual memorial service or spreading of my ashes or whatever my family decides.

It's...incredible.

suzanne day by day said...

Beautiful, beautiful poem.

maya said...

Nance, you know this is not allowed and I hope I'm not around for any of this and this is making me cry so hard. (So I guess this is a nice tit for tat, my friend <3)

maya said...

Thank you, Suzanne!

StephLove said...

Powerful last line.

beam me up, I guess

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