Wednesday, December 10, 2025

taking a message

in the swift silence of dreams 
or their silent swiftness 
I know what it takes 

take it from me, what I feel 
now is only the strange 
weight of grief

not grief itself--that may take
lifetimes, I doubt anyone
can take that from me
______
Pic: A frozen Red Cedar.

8 comments:

J said...

Such a lovely poem, and you nailed it. The weight of the grief will eventually fade, but the grief itself is always there. You’ve been here before, so you know…but still, every time we go through it, it’s kind of a shock, right?

Lisa's Yarns said...

This is stunning, Maya!!

Nance said...

Oh, so true. This is lovely, and the photo complements it perfectly: the partially frozen river, some movement, but places are still locked in ice.

I'm not sure if having a poet's heart makes grief harder or easier, my friend. XO

StephLove said...

I like how the repetition of words in the first stanza and beginning of the second propels the poem along.

maya said...

A steep curve every time... I hope never to become used to it

maya said...

Thank you, Lisa <3

maya said...

Thank you, Nance.
There is a lot of distraction in working/trying to work things out...

maya said...

Thank you, Steph! (There's some in the third as well...)

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